I don't know whether this qualifies as a poem or not. But I wanted to write it. The simple thoughts I had when I was traveling to my office today.
Had fallen for a girl's sweet words.......
Had been mesmerized by the two and half hour movies.....
Had been taken to dreamy worlds by romantic songs.....
Had been taken over by self pride in thinking as a good writer.......
Now realized my folly.... and have surrendered myself to you, O Almighty......
Here I am .... Falling at your feet ..... Falling now!
This journey of love began with Prem and Simran who could never come together. It continued with Preetham and Seema who were just one soul in two bodies. Now its time to look into something bigger than love. A Platonic relationship...
thats so typical me...but it shows you also get happy by the small things in life...which is act good, you don't have to look too beyond to make yourself happy!
ReplyDeleteloved that one re..
ReplyDeleteahhh
Well surrendering ourselves to the almighty is very difficult..Spiritual riches are far ahead of material ones..so I too value them more..
liked the way u said it :)
The last line created someone unusual effect. a very fine piece of work. come up with such ones more too often.
ReplyDeleteNot exactly the poem but beautifully pictured. I liked the way you crafted it :)
ReplyDeleteVery well picturised!!
ReplyDeleteOften few thoughts cross our mind and we dont care to think/write abt it...
U did it... :)
hmm...but what's wrong in a little enjoyment?
ReplyDelete@ Amit
ReplyDeleteWe do think alike :)
@ Priya
Surrendering to almighty is simple. But being simple is very difficult :)
@ Ananditha
The last line represents the way folk artists from our side end their conversation in a art form called Yakshagana
@ Lena
Ty....
@ Prathima
Yes we tend to ignore simple thoughts which cud have profound interest if digged deep....
@ Meira
Definitely nothing wrong! Enjoy!.... But sometimes these types of thoughts do cross the mind....
you pass in flying colors mister..
ReplyDeletesimple words created pure magic :) ...