Saturday, August 29, 2009

Call It Whatever you wish!

I don't know whether this qualifies as a poem or not. But I wanted to write it. The simple thoughts I had when I was traveling to my office today.

Had fallen for a girl's sweet words.......

Had been mesmerized by the two and half hour movies.....

Had been taken to dreamy worlds by romantic songs.....

Had been taken over by self pride in thinking as a good writer.......

Now realized my folly.... and have surrendered myself to you, O Almighty......

Here I am .... Falling at your feet ..... Falling now!

8 comments:

Hopeless Romantic said...

thats so typical me...but it shows you also get happy by the small things in life...which is act good, you don't have to look too beyond to make yourself happy!

Priya Joyce said...

loved that one re..
ahhh
Well surrendering ourselves to the almighty is very difficult..Spiritual riches are far ahead of material ones..so I too value them more..
liked the way u said it :)

Dhandal said...

The last line created someone unusual effect. a very fine piece of work. come up with such ones more too often.

lena said...

Not exactly the poem but beautifully pictured. I liked the way you crafted it :)

Prathima Bhat said...

Very well picturised!!

Often few thoughts cross our mind and we dont care to think/write abt it...
U did it... :)

Meira said...

hmm...but what's wrong in a little enjoyment?

Suresh Kumar said...

@ Amit
We do think alike :)

@ Priya
Surrendering to almighty is simple. But being simple is very difficult :)

@ Ananditha
The last line represents the way folk artists from our side end their conversation in a art form called Yakshagana

@ Lena
Ty....

@ Prathima
Yes we tend to ignore simple thoughts which cud have profound interest if digged deep....

@ Meira
Definitely nothing wrong! Enjoy!.... But sometimes these types of thoughts do cross the mind....

Charmed One! said...

you pass in flying colors mister..
simple words created pure magic :) ...

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